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A review by deepower7
Date Me, Bryson Keller by Kevin van Whye
1.0
I really wasn't going to rant about this one but what in the name of sweet Simon Spier did I just read? Was it an after school special? Was it a fever dream? Who can tell? (Full disclosure, I didn't know anything about any plagiarism until after I'd finished so that didn't affect my reading.)
I feel like every time the author came across a choice between a logical, carefully thought out development in the plot, and doing something utterly senseless and baffling, they went with door number 2. Never have I struggled so much to suspend my disbelief in a contemporary ya.
But also, execution wise I felt like I've read fanfic with writing less amateurish, someone needs to tell the writer about this thing called NUANCE.
makes no damn sense. does NOT compel me tho.
I feel like every time the author came across a choice between a logical, carefully thought out development in the plot, and doing something utterly senseless and baffling, they went with door number 2. Never have I struggled so much to suspend my disbelief in a contemporary ya.
But also, execution wise I felt like I've read fanfic with writing less amateurish, someone needs to tell the writer about this thing called NUANCE.
makes no damn sense. does NOT compel me tho.