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kaykilla227 's review for:
Give Me a Reason
by A.L. Jackson
i really wanted to like this book. i thought the plot had serious potential. unfortunately i had some issues in enjoying this book:
1. the internal monologue - i wish the author would’ve spent less time on this and more time on developing the actual relationship between Eden and Trent. i caught myself skimming a lot of this because i just felt it was unnecessary and didn’t do anything for the plot.
2. these characters are supposed to be from LA and northeastern California…. why are they talking like they’re from Mississippi or Arkansas?
3. why is Gage, who’s 5, either talking like a adult or a baby?
4. just because Trent is a “biker” doesn’t mean he doesn’t know how to use full sentences?
5. take out all the double words and back to back double sentences in this book and it would probably go from more than 400 pages to less than 300.
1. the internal monologue - i wish the author would’ve spent less time on this and more time on developing the actual relationship between Eden and Trent. i caught myself skimming a lot of this because i just felt it was unnecessary and didn’t do anything for the plot.
2. these characters are supposed to be from LA and northeastern California…. why are they talking like they’re from Mississippi or Arkansas?
3. why is Gage, who’s 5, either talking like a adult or a baby?
4. just because Trent is a “biker” doesn’t mean he doesn’t know how to use full sentences?
5. take out all the double words and back to back double sentences in this book and it would probably go from more than 400 pages to less than 300.