A review by maimaireads
The Sky on Fire by Jenn Lyons

adventurous fast-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? A mix

4.0

I adore Jenn Lyons' writing, and this book is no exception. The world building is unique, the plot is intricate, and the characters are delightful (even the evil ones). That said, I think it missed a few edits. Something that was said or happened in one chapter might be contracted by a character or the plot in the next, and not in a way that meant the original statement/event was a lie, but in the way that meant something had been overlooked in editing/drafting -- I noticed that a few times. Aside from that there were a lot of simple typos which are easier to overlook, but still took some translating in my head to realize what the sentence was supposed to say. Anyway, if Jenn Lyons is looking for a reader to make sure those plot mishaps don't happen and silly typos are caught before her next book comes out, I'm available and over-eager.