A review by erichart
Analog Science Fiction and Fact, November 2014 by Robert R. Chase, Bud Sparhawk, Auston Habershaw, Ian Creasey, Arlan Andrews Sr., V.G. Campen, Derek Künsken, Jay Werkheiser, Trevor Quachri, Lola Haskins

2.0

Some interesting world building, although the story of a naive or ignorant youth discovering a wider world has already been told many times. The author offers us hints of further mysteries, and this becomes a problem.
"Flow" seems incomplete, obviously part of a larger story, and in the end is too slight to stand alone.