lydsquids 's review for:

When Forever Comes by Tawni Suchy
3.5
hopeful tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This is a sweet story overall- I loved the faith of all the characters interwoven into the story, that was done well. Some aspects of the story were pretty unbelievable but I don’t know if that’s typical with a billionaire love story. Someone called it a modern Christian fairytale and I could see that. For some reason the writing felt much more natural towards the end of the book, the beginning was a little clunky. I also disliked that the protagonist, Olivia suffers from feeling like she’s not enough to the point where her choices don’t make sense but somehow all of that changes overnight. The idea behind the story is great, as I said the faith of all the characters is believable and I think is written well- the other things just need tweaking. I’d give the next book in the series a chance.