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shmsy 's review for:

Dr. Stanton by T.L. Swan
3.0

'Liked it' seems a bit strong but it was better than ' it was ok', so 2.5* - see below for ratings breakdown.

That first chapter, super hot and really strong but it wasn't sustained. The H and h, what a pair. Drama, drama, drama. The h, made every bad decision a person could make and being a liar to boot and while the H had some sympathy from me initially, that quickly tapered off. He was supposed to be uber alpha bit instead he was uber man-child. They both needed to grow up. The whole sex club angle really didn't need to be included in the plot and came with lots of nonsense. It added little but more unecessary drama and really these two could conjure it up out of nothing.

So when it came to the rating I struggled becuase while I wasn't liking anyone but the kid, the writings good and I didn't skim bits but read it all. So starting at 5 stars, I applied or took off a star for each major issue. 1 star off each for H and h, 1 star off for the sex club plot line, 1 star off for author manipulation about secret baby, and add 1.5 stars for the writing. So 2.5* it is. I know, I know, you're all tempted to copy my sophisticated rating system but I warn you it's only works for brains like mine. ;)