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A review by courtney_in_chaos
Until Trevor by Aurora Rose Reynolds
2.0
There are a lot of similarities between this book and [b:Until November|18341046|Until November (Until, #1)|Aurora Rose Reynolds|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1376867667l/18341046._SX50_.jpg|25808543], but this one just didn't work for me. Yeah, Asher and Trevor are both similar flavor of alpha males, but Trevor just wasn't as likeable as Asher. I was pretty annoyed with him right from the beginning when we find out why he stopped hanging out with Liz, and to top it off he kept up with his manwhore ways after pushing her away while also scaring off any guy who came near her. Hello douchebag.
Eventually he begins perusing her again, but only because he finds out she's not a virgin like he thought, and then he decides to take their relationship from 0 to 1000 without any consideration for Liz's feelings on the matter. There really isn't any relationship building in here at all. Just Trevor bossing Liz around. He even starts bullying her into having a baby, even after she tells him that she doesn't want kids.
There just doesn't seem to be any love between these characters. It felt more like Liz was kidnapped and forced to hang out with this guy. The relationship development in the first book of the series just seemed a lot better.
The plot outside the relationship was a bit thin as well and didn't really add much to the story. It just felt shoved in there and popped up at random times with no build-up.
As far as the writing style goes, it can be really hard to read this author's work sometimes. The story will jump ahead scenes from one paragraph to the next and it can be a bit jarring trying to figure out where you are and what's happening. I didn't notice it as much in [b:Until November|18341046|Until November (Until, #1)|Aurora Rose Reynolds|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1376867667l/18341046._SX50_.jpg|25808543], but it happened quite a bit in here. Sometimes different characters' lines aren't separated into different paragraphs, either, so it can be confusing figuring out who is actually speaking.
Honestly, what I liked best about this book were the sneak peeks into Cash's story. There was more going on with him in this book than the MCs.
Eventually he begins perusing her again, but only because he finds out she's not a virgin like he thought, and then he decides to take their relationship from 0 to 1000 without any consideration for Liz's feelings on the matter. There really isn't any relationship building in here at all. Just Trevor bossing Liz around. He even starts bullying her into having a baby, even after she tells him that she doesn't want kids.
There just doesn't seem to be any love between these characters. It felt more like Liz was kidnapped and forced to hang out with this guy. The relationship development in the first book of the series just seemed a lot better.
The plot outside the relationship was a bit thin as well and didn't really add much to the story. It just felt shoved in there and popped up at random times with no build-up.
As far as the writing style goes, it can be really hard to read this author's work sometimes. The story will jump ahead scenes from one paragraph to the next and it can be a bit jarring trying to figure out where you are and what's happening. I didn't notice it as much in [b:Until November|18341046|Until November (Until, #1)|Aurora Rose Reynolds|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1376867667l/18341046._SX50_.jpg|25808543], but it happened quite a bit in here. Sometimes different characters' lines aren't separated into different paragraphs, either, so it can be confusing figuring out who is actually speaking.
Honestly, what I liked best about this book were the sneak peeks into Cash's story. There was more going on with him in this book than the MCs.