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2.0
mysterious slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

The story was just okay for me.  There where however, a few inconsistencies.  First indication that this may not be the best edited book - the spelling of tyres, boot for trunk of car and then says - carting across the state - ummm, no states in Britain and here in the US we say trunk and use tires on our vehicles. Pace is very, very slow; made even more so by the minutiae of daily tasks spelled out in detail. A good idea just needs better writing/editing, most importantly to include some scary parts.