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A review by rjhopkinson
Corsets and Cogs by Melle Amade, Rebekah R. Ganiere, Leona Bushman, Angelique Armae, E.B. Black, Blaire Edens, Lexi Ostrow, J.A. Culican, Coyote Starr, Bokerah Brumley, Katherine McIntyre, Summer Chase, Dana Lyons, Jayne Fury, Pauline Creeden, Dena Garson, Skye MacKinnon, Eli Constant, Melanie Karsak, Laura Greenwood, Erin Hayes, S.J. Davis, Ever Coming, Margo Bond Collins, Julie Morgan
2.0
Good Stories, Poor editing.
Most of the stories were quite good but many of them needed an editor/proof-reader (the worse examples being 'gorilla warfare', and one character who changed names for a single paragraph in the middle of the story). However, a few read like second drafts, with major plot holes/timeshift problems. Overall the stories were a 3/5 but the editing and proofing issues brought it down to a 2/5.
Most of the stories were quite good but many of them needed an editor/proof-reader (the worse examples being 'gorilla warfare', and one character who changed names for a single paragraph in the middle of the story). However, a few read like second drafts, with major plot holes/timeshift problems. Overall the stories were a 3/5 but the editing and proofing issues brought it down to a 2/5.