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Talon by Jayden Jelso
DID NOT FINISH: 15%

DNF at 15%. The concept was interesting but I struggled with the writing style. 

Reasons I DNF’d:
1) It felt like telling and by showing.
2) I didn’t love the characters. The bad guys felt too extreme and I needed a little more moral greyness. 
3) A silly reason but it had a dog and I didn’t know if he was going to be ok. 

TW: violence 



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