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A review by rellimreads
Her First Billionaire by Julia Kent
1.0
The whole set was free on Amazon and I still want a refund. I didn’t make it past the first story/novella. There were typos and spelling errors, but that’s not where this sunk to one star.
I’m not slut shaming for one-night-stands/sex on the first date ~ but FFS no condoms, no talk of birth control. Not even an attempt at safe sex in any way. it wasn’t sexy. It was nauseating.
It also wasn’t funny. The jokes were flat. The internal dialogue was cringe-worthy. Dylan’s practically dreaming out their whole relationship and thinking he’s in love in between bouts of not being able to make basic conversation with her.
If these guys manage to make it to a second date it should be to the local clinic to get some basic sex Ed and condoms.
Also, if the plot is going to be this weak ~ then the writing of the sex scenes better be damn good. And they weren’t. Not only is language not at all romantic or sexy or erotic ~ but we have no idea what’s going on. They change positions in the middle of a paragraph without any writing of how they got there. One sentence she’s riding him and the next he’s behind her and she talking about fluids gushing. It sounded like the description of a toilet backing up.
I’m not slut shaming for one-night-stands/sex on the first date ~ but FFS no condoms, no talk of birth control. Not even an attempt at safe sex in any way. it wasn’t sexy. It was nauseating.
It also wasn’t funny. The jokes were flat. The internal dialogue was cringe-worthy. Dylan’s practically dreaming out their whole relationship and thinking he’s in love in between bouts of not being able to make basic conversation with her.
If these guys manage to make it to a second date it should be to the local clinic to get some basic sex Ed and condoms.
Also, if the plot is going to be this weak ~ then the writing of the sex scenes better be damn good. And they weren’t. Not only is language not at all romantic or sexy or erotic ~ but we have no idea what’s going on. They change positions in the middle of a paragraph without any writing of how they got there. One sentence she’s riding him and the next he’s behind her and she talking about fluids gushing. It sounded like the description of a toilet backing up.