A review by bailey_the_bookworm
The Genesis of Misery by Neon Yang

challenging dark fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.75

There are so many things about this book that I liked (mech fights! Weird magic rocks! Intrigue!) and it’s a vast, compelling universe. I would have DNFed but there was enough good stuff that I was willing to read the whole thing. 

That said. There were also many things about this book that I found frustrating. Plot-wise, Misery becomes much less interesting as a character partway through the book—she’s a murderous, abusive liar and it’s difficult for me to get on board for that in a POV character. I don’t think you’re supposed to get on board for it, to be fair, but it was a slog. 

At the writing level: certain words were way overused (various forms of “comprise” are major culprits here). The Extremely Online tenor of the writing also didn’t land right for me, especially given the world-building—it doesn’t make sense and ended up breaking immersion. 

There were also some editing issues: random tense changes (present to past for two sentences for no reason), little stuff that individually wouldn’t be bad but over the course of the book became aggravating. 

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