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A review by justlily
Notes from Ghost Town by Kate Ellison
DNF at Chapter 5.
The premise here is so interesting and the end of the first chapter literally had my jaw dropping. In fact, even know that I've quit it, I want so badly to know how it turns out.
Unfortunately, the author writes so awkwardly. And I don't mean awkward characters. I mean awkward word placement, awkward sentence structure, repeating adjectives, confusing turns of phrase that don't add anything to the story whatsoever.
This could have been so good. It just...needed to be written by someone else.
The premise here is so interesting and the end of the first chapter literally had my jaw dropping. In fact, even know that I've quit it, I want so badly to know how it turns out.
Unfortunately, the author writes so awkwardly. And I don't mean awkward characters. I mean awkward word placement, awkward sentence structure, repeating adjectives, confusing turns of phrase that don't add anything to the story whatsoever.
This could have been so good. It just...needed to be written by someone else.