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Heaven by Alexandra Adornetto
3.0

so many plot points in this book were almost entirely irrelevant, including but not limited to:
1. the girls that show interest in xavier, particularly peyton
2. beth and xavier needing to masquerade as siblings??? ur literally kidding
3. molly and wade*
4. xavier being a halfling

(by irrelevant i mean that they contributed very little if not nothing at all to the overarching plot of beth and xavier’s love story)

*why did molly being in an abusive relationship need to be treated like it was a joke? it sucks that molly gets treated like a pet at best and a nuisance at worst :( my best girl friends are fr my lifeblood, it sucks to see the “best friend” character get treated so badly

also… maturing is realizing that gabriel is the hunkiest of them all no matter what

also x2 … WHERE THE FUCK IS PHANTOM IN ALL OF THIS???? AND WHY ISNT BETH CONSTANTLY THINKING ABT HIM???????