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knoxiegrey 's review for:
Bend Him Break Him
by MN Bennet
slow-paced
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
No
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Jock and goth were overused. Everything was over explained.
How is Isaac bitching about inappropriate d/s when he's doing that!?
It was just so poorly written. I wanted to DNF so bad. So much telling and not showing. Just overly descriptive for things that added nothing.
The Leon stuff at the end was not needed.
Could have ended so much sooner.
The timeline did not make since. There were so many weeks that passed but then no time at all.
It felt like poor revenge fantasy fic.
It was barely even "dark" they were having feelings that weren't hate so early on.
How is Isaac bitching about inappropriate d/s when he's doing that!?
It was just so poorly written. I wanted to DNF so bad. So much telling and not showing. Just overly descriptive for things that added nothing.
The Leon stuff at the end was not needed.
Could have ended so much sooner.
The timeline did not make since. There were so many weeks that passed but then no time at all.
It felt like poor revenge fantasy fic.
It was barely even "dark" they were having feelings that weren't hate so early on.