Take a photo of a barcode or cover
blindmanbaldwin 's review for:
Heart of the Sun Warrior
by Sue Lynn Tan
Each new part of a system becomes an additional point of failure, true in any kind of creation. Here in "Heart of the Sun Warrior", the abundance of information and beats weighs it down.
Between the love triangle and the parents, the lead is split too many ways which gives the scenes little space — which creates the opposite problem where after a compelling climax, there are ~50 pages of resolution which sucks all the momentum dry as everything is resolved emotionally before we get here.
Between the love triangle and the parents, the lead is split too many ways which gives the scenes little space — which creates the opposite problem where after a compelling climax, there are ~50 pages of resolution which sucks all the momentum dry as everything is resolved emotionally before we get here.