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A review by n0ize
On What Grounds by Cleo Coyle
1.0
No. No.
Let me tell you some people can write poc and some people cant, and I’m sorry but Cleo can not. The way I could tell each character spoke with a stereotypical accent or behaved a certain way just gave me the ick. The audio made it even more worse and why is it that the blonde characters are described more like “ she had beautifully long blonde hair with milky pale skin and starry blue eyes.” And characters like the black girl is saying things like that’s “Phat!” and has fake nails on that are pink. Give all your characters descriptions please!
The coffee theme is cute and I thought it would be really easy n cozy. But all I’m getting is blah coffee coffee coffee blah blah oh he hot blah I’m rich! Blah blah boring history. Lol she also talked about her breast in the most oddest way. Here is an example of a woman writing like a man.
Let me tell you some people can write poc and some people cant, and I’m sorry but Cleo can not. The way I could tell each character spoke with a stereotypical accent or behaved a certain way just gave me the ick. The audio made it even more worse and why is it that the blonde characters are described more like “ she had beautifully long blonde hair with milky pale skin and starry blue eyes.” And characters like the black girl is saying things like that’s “Phat!” and has fake nails on that are pink. Give all your characters descriptions please!
The coffee theme is cute and I thought it would be really easy n cozy. But all I’m getting is blah coffee coffee coffee blah blah oh he hot blah I’m rich! Blah blah boring history. Lol she also talked about her breast in the most oddest way. Here is an example of a woman writing like a man.