A review by hello_lovely13
The Unfortunate Side Effects of Heartbreak and Magic by Breanne Randall

emotional hopeful medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.5

This was an extremely mixed bag (and I’m glad I read this via the library and didn’t spend any money on it). The overall vibe of the book was well done, very cozy, but I did have a problem with the writing. There were many instances where you could tell the author was trying really hard to make the writing atmospheric by adding too many unnecessary descriptive words, such as something along the lines of “the air was crisp like my apple pie”. It was a bit annoying. I love flowery writing, but this felt forced. Also, there were a few times where there were pop culture references that made me cringe (I.e.: her wanting appear cool when she was angry and saying to herself “conceal, don’t feel”…give me a break). Not to mention that I hated pretty much every single character (and you’re not supposed to!!!!!). Let’s start off with Sadie: she’s supposed to be the lovable, relatable people-pleaser that we root for, but she makes so many decisions that either annoy or enrage me.
One of the main things that completely turned me off from her character is that she literally STOLE her ex’s dog and NEVER gave it back. Yes, initially it was a misunderstanding, but then she goes out of her way to hide it from him once she realized who it belonged to, changed the dog’s name, and the two of them just joke about this???? Girl, give him his fucking dog back.
 
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