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Nameless
by Lili St. Crow
There is a reason why the second book only has 110 reviews and the third has only 48 reviews.
I’m so angry with this story. First off the first 120 pages can be cut. Start with the engagement, seriously. Nothing in the beginning even mattered. None of it made any sense, I had to ignore the names of the families, because that did not matter. I had to ignore all the magic, period. Because of course that did not matter!! Fey, Minotaurs, Potential, Kiss, all the extra fluff to make this a longer story could have been cut. Also throwing in the middle of a story, “I need an apple,” does not make it a retelling of Snow White.
The POV was terrible and should have just been written from Camille’s perspective. I felt like I was being told a story by a friend who just doesn’t know how to get straight to the point. I have also noticed this trilogy has come out two years after The Lunar Chronicles. Which I have not yet read, but have seen the ratings and reviews.. The ending is also a bit too much Twilight. So all-in-all, I do not believe this even comes close to a retelling of anything!
I’m so angry with this story. First off the first 120 pages can be cut. Start with the engagement, seriously. Nothing in the beginning even mattered. None of it made any sense, I had to ignore the names of the families, because that did not matter. I had to ignore all the magic, period. Because of course that did not matter!! Fey, Minotaurs, Potential, Kiss, all the extra fluff to make this a longer story could have been cut. Also throwing in the middle of a story, “I need an apple,” does not make it a retelling of Snow White.
The POV was terrible and should have just been written from Camille’s perspective. I felt like I was being told a story by a friend who just doesn’t know how to get straight to the point. I have also noticed this trilogy has come out two years after The Lunar Chronicles. Which I have not yet read, but have seen the ratings and reviews.. The ending is also a bit too much Twilight. So all-in-all, I do not believe this even comes close to a retelling of anything!