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A review by bookliac
Taking Control by L.V. Lane
4.0
I really enjoy the setting of this book. The naughty scenes are written really lovely.
But I had a bit of struggle following the story itself. At some points I had to re-read a page because I thought I missed something. But there was just a jump in the story and not an obvious indicator that it happened. (Took me 2 more books to realize that theres sometimes a bigger line break.. Id appreacite some "***" or something)
And while the idea of the ending is cute, I honestly thought my ebook was broken and the first chapter was repeated. I get the idea the author went for but it was.. too similar? It felt really copy pasted.
And I need more story. The world building has so much potential. The naughty bits are awesome but this could be so much more than that.
But I had a bit of struggle following the story itself. At some points I had to re-read a page because I thought I missed something. But there was just a jump in the story and not an obvious indicator that it happened. (Took me 2 more books to realize that theres sometimes a bigger line break.. Id appreacite some "***" or something)
And while the idea of the ending is cute, I honestly thought my ebook was broken and the first chapter was repeated. I get the idea the author went for but it was.. too similar? It felt really copy pasted.
And I need more story. The world building has so much potential. The naughty bits are awesome but this could be so much more than that.