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A review by annabayreads
Autumn in London by Louise Bay
3.0
So after reading the Fifty Shades Of Grey trilogy I feel that the erotic fiction books, has exploded, they are everywhere to be find, in every form and in every length. I found this in the IBook store and it was cheap, for all 3 books, they didn't really cost anything, so I thought why not.
I didn't expect anything at all because I've never heard of it before, but I find myself really 50-50 about it. I feel like Bay's writing is very basic but she's really not that good at writing kissing and sex scenes, she is good at describing them and get you into it but sometimes I was really confused on how they were positioned or where they were in the apartment and other details like that, basically it sometimes went on a bit too quickly so you lost track and other times it was like some information maybe was missing.
I feel like the book definitely had to much sex in here, I know It's an erotic book, but there were almost nothing else in all of the 3 books, and that get's a little much in the end. I feel like the books needed a bit more ''love'' this is about a girl changing a boy, so I was missing a bit more detail on how he felt about it all, how he was getting used to the feeling of a girlfriend and how he handled it, inside his head, again the sex scenes took over, and the ''love'' could definitely replace some of the sex scenes, because there were just too many.
It was like she was maybe trying a bit too hard on getting the right scenes and the right pictures in the readers head and that's a bit of a shame.
I loved that we get to see both perspectives, I love learning about what the boy is thinking, not just the girl, so that was a really nice touch.
I felt like the ending of the series was good but also not that great, I felt like there were missing something, maybe an Epilogue about what happened after just maybe 20 pages of 10 even, so we get to see how they adapt to the lifestyle, especially Ethan. If you do want to read anything from Bay, start with this series.
I didn't expect anything at all because I've never heard of it before, but I find myself really 50-50 about it. I feel like Bay's writing is very basic but she's really not that good at writing kissing and sex scenes, she is good at describing them and get you into it but sometimes I was really confused on how they were positioned or where they were in the apartment and other details like that, basically it sometimes went on a bit too quickly so you lost track and other times it was like some information maybe was missing.
I feel like the book definitely had to much sex in here, I know It's an erotic book, but there were almost nothing else in all of the 3 books, and that get's a little much in the end. I feel like the books needed a bit more ''love'' this is about a girl changing a boy, so I was missing a bit more detail on how he felt about it all, how he was getting used to the feeling of a girlfriend and how he handled it, inside his head, again the sex scenes took over, and the ''love'' could definitely replace some of the sex scenes, because there were just too many.
It was like she was maybe trying a bit too hard on getting the right scenes and the right pictures in the readers head and that's a bit of a shame.
I loved that we get to see both perspectives, I love learning about what the boy is thinking, not just the girl, so that was a really nice touch.
I felt like the ending of the series was good but also not that great, I felt like there were missing something, maybe an Epilogue about what happened after just maybe 20 pages of 10 even, so we get to see how they adapt to the lifestyle, especially Ethan. If you do want to read anything from Bay, start with this series.