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The Path of Ascension by C. Mantis
DID NOT FINISH: 14%

Characters were not engaging, world building barely existed. Dialog accounted to a whole lot of explaining. 

But above all, the narrator was grating. The MC meets a group several chapters in, and they all had the same speech patterns but different voices. Also, you know that special technique narrators use for yelling without actually yelling? This narrator used that technique for most of the dialog.