A review by hank
Alliance by S.K. Dunstall

4.0

Well bummer. The flaws are starting to glare a bit more. The writing is truly atrocious, I am not sure who to blame, the writers, the seemingly missing editor or Aunt Sally the proofreader. Miss-spellings (of course who am I to talk), whole paragraphs and even an entire chapter that makes no sense. There was one part where a spy was listening in to two different conversations at the same time and the authors clearly wanted to do something clever, switching back and forth between the two creating some tension. All they created was a headache and indecipherable text.

Still love the story, still love the characters, still love the world but the shine is definitely off. I still read it in less than a day and went right on to the third book but I won't be shouting the merits from the rooftops