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A review by jscarpa14
Hard Rock Tease by Athena Wright
3.0
It's a habit I think...
Like the second novel in this series Wright demonstrates she can write a seriously steamy sex scene, she can create interesting and flawed characters, she can even put forth a decent plot concept, the problem is there's more sex in this novel than plot. Probably the most frustrating part about it is the writer is actually very talented, she could give this story so much more than countless steamy sex scenes strung together by a couple pages at most of plot between them, she simply chooses not to. There's an incredible eye for description and detail in this work. There's a depth to some of the scene that displays a deep ability to connect to her characters, she just doesn't bother to put that time and detail into a full plot outside of steamy sex scenes and I don't think that's good enough. You can Ms. Wright and in this case you SHOULD. For what it is it's a decent story, I just feel like it could be and should be so much more.
Like the second novel in this series Wright demonstrates she can write a seriously steamy sex scene, she can create interesting and flawed characters, she can even put forth a decent plot concept, the problem is there's more sex in this novel than plot. Probably the most frustrating part about it is the writer is actually very talented, she could give this story so much more than countless steamy sex scenes strung together by a couple pages at most of plot between them, she simply chooses not to. There's an incredible eye for description and detail in this work. There's a depth to some of the scene that displays a deep ability to connect to her characters, she just doesn't bother to put that time and detail into a full plot outside of steamy sex scenes and I don't think that's good enough. You can Ms. Wright and in this case you SHOULD. For what it is it's a decent story, I just feel like it could be and should be so much more.