mom2boyz 's review for:

Born in Fire by K.F. Breene

2.0

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It was a good read, but I found myself disappointed and I won't be continuing the series. The writing was good. The characters had depth. The story was interesting but a lot of the details weren't well thought out and didn't make sense. The heroine made tons of dumb moves, like going by herself into a cavern full of vampires... why? And for some reason the heroine understands her father's magic but not her mother's even though her father is MIA and her mother raised and trained her. For some reason some low on the totem pole shifter is the go-to for information about mages? Then in some scenes there was just way too many words, I had to re-read to figure out what was going on. On top of all this the hero is a total flop, he's the cliche good-looking but cold blooded vampire... but really he's a bad tempered, infertile, undead man-ho and really not husband material. He was well done character wise, but he would have been way more entertaining as a secondary character rather than a romantic interest.