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A review by _camk_
Forbidden Mind by Karpov Kinrade
1.0
I am so surprised by the praise this book has received in the reviews. Forbidden Minds was terrible.
Firstly, at only over a hundred pages, the story moved at lightning pace. One minute Sam and Drake are getting to know each other and the next they are seemingly in love. She gives no real timeline so for all I know this could have happened between a matter or days or weeks.
This leads to that because the book was short, there was little detail or filler to create a real story. I read it in about an hour or less. Are you afraid of using paper, Kinrade? You're a writer, use paper.
Which brings me to point three, the story is not well written. The writing is bland and unexciting and reminds me of an English Essay for school.
Firstly, at only over a hundred pages, the story moved at lightning pace. One minute Sam and Drake are getting to know each other and the next they are seemingly in love. She gives no real timeline so for all I know this could have happened between a matter or days or weeks.
This leads to that because the book was short, there was little detail or filler to create a real story. I read it in about an hour or less. Are you afraid of using paper, Kinrade? You're a writer, use paper.
Which brings me to point three, the story is not well written. The writing is bland and unexciting and reminds me of an English Essay for school.