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A review by vampire_mother
Rubbed Raw by Bella Jeanisse
3.0
#ARR from fifty Shades Support Group#
This one was a little better than the first book. But still found the whole missing plot problematic.
The sex was interesting, but still the characters needed a little polishing. The author needs to work a little at their feelings.
I mean that Crystal was in love with Giovanni and things like that. But after she broke up with him, within 2 paragraphs she was fucking Tommy.
Sex was too much. She was cumming at every page. Geez. And she had 25 orgasms? How the hell? I would die after 4-5 =)) maybe every woman would die after 4-5.
And again the boys had a constant hard on...
This one was a little better than the first book. But still found the whole missing plot problematic.
The sex was interesting, but still the characters needed a little polishing. The author needs to work a little at their feelings.
I mean that Crystal was in love with Giovanni and things like that. But after she broke up with him, within 2 paragraphs she was fucking Tommy.
Sex was too much. She was cumming at every page. Geez. And she had 25 orgasms? How the hell? I would die after 4-5 =)) maybe every woman would die after 4-5.
And again the boys had a constant hard on...