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A review by spellbinding_steph
The Last Daughter of Smoke and Shadows by Lillie Jean Andrews
Did not finish book.
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
1.0
DNF at 12% (50ish pages). The story sounds like an interesting concept but the book could’ve used another round of editing and/or proofreading which made it hard to focus on the story when my eye would catch something off. The errors weren’t substantial per say they were just frequent enough that they were hard to overlook.
I do want to give the author some grace though because she is young and it looks like she started working on this book at 18/19. I do think her writing has potential to grow as she does. Not to say younger people can’t write well, but you can often see someone’s age and experience in their writings.