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rachel_faerie 's review for:
Fool's Gold
by Jon Hollins
The synopsis and tag line were so interesting and had me hyped what an absolute let down.
Fatphobia. Way too lengthy descriptions and inner dialogue that literally say the same thing 4 different ways. And PLOT Repetitiveness. Like literally the same thing happens 3 times, make a plan, plan goes wrong, kill dragon on accident by some miracle. Repeat x3.
The world building was medicore. The characters were bland. There were 2 characters that fell in love and had 0 chemistry… and the first time they had sex was borderline R*pe…. And the WOMAN was the aggressor. She basically jumped the dude without his permission and he’s like “ok I’ll just go with it” which was just weird and I didn’t like it.
Literally every villain or bad guy or person who stood in the way of the main cast of characters was described as fat or hefty or slovenly or piggish or a cow … like we get it bro you think fat people are inherently evil shut the fuck up already find a better way to describe people we aren’t supposed to like.
The ONLY reason this isn’t one star is because of Balur being funny to me I just kept picturing a big idiot himbo Argonian from Skyrim
Fatphobia. Way too lengthy descriptions and inner dialogue that literally say the same thing 4 different ways. And PLOT Repetitiveness. Like literally the same thing happens 3 times, make a plan, plan goes wrong, kill dragon on accident by some miracle. Repeat x3.
The world building was medicore. The characters were bland. There were 2 characters that fell in love and had 0 chemistry… and the first time they had sex was borderline R*pe…. And the WOMAN was the aggressor. She basically jumped the dude without his permission and he’s like “ok I’ll just go with it” which was just weird and I didn’t like it.
Literally every villain or bad guy or person who stood in the way of the main cast of characters was described as fat or hefty or slovenly or piggish or a cow … like we get it bro you think fat people are inherently evil shut the fuck up already find a better way to describe people we aren’t supposed to like.
The ONLY reason this isn’t one star is because of Balur being funny to me I just kept picturing a big idiot himbo Argonian from Skyrim