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A review by elenmasson
Both of You by Adele Parks
2.0
**Spoiler alert**
I don’t understand why, when writing from Fiona’s perspective she doesn’t think about the fact that Kylie is locked up/what she needs to do to keep her alive etc once. It’s her stream of consciousness and not once does she drift to thinking about her until the reveal comes that she is the abductor? I think its a significant plot issue and it’s something that happens often with ‘who dunnits’ from the first person consciousness.
I don’t understand why, when writing from Fiona’s perspective she doesn’t think about the fact that Kylie is locked up/what she needs to do to keep her alive etc once. It’s her stream of consciousness and not once does she drift to thinking about her until the reveal comes that she is the abductor? I think its a significant plot issue and it’s something that happens often with ‘who dunnits’ from the first person consciousness.