ixris 's review for:

The Bridge Kingdom by Danielle L. Jensen
2.25
adventurous fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

For a while this was going to be a solid 3 stars. Then we went to snake island.

I'm a lover of pulp. I think indiepub is great and adds to the literary landscape. I've not read a dedicated romantasy before, but I have read my share of fantasy and of goofy af romance. 

Things I like: 
* the fights were fine
* the bridge is cool
* I've read worse global political intrigue plots


Things I wanted to like better: 
* Lara really could have avoided this whole plot by using the "trust but verify" tactic the MOMENT she thought she was wrong about the ithicanians,  bc I saw her dad's BS by chapter two.
* I did read so many of laras chapters in Christian bale batman voice bc they're SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EDGY 
* none of this ecological world building makes a lick of sense
* miscommunication is literally my least favorite romance plot. If the only reason they can't be together is one of them is too chicken to use their words, there's a problem w this relationship and I don't believe their love will endure 
* the bedroom scene narration literally says their physical acts are making her a better person (biiiiiiig sigh)

The writing is goofy, but whatever. There are plot inconsistencies, but im willing to forgive something that was originally indiepub. I was quite willing to have fun w it and have a fantasy island vacation, and then the last third of the plot showed up. I wanted a lot more nuance and thought in this climax than there was. 

I will not be reading the rest of the series.

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