A review by loser127
Ketchup Clouds by Annabel Pitcher

3.0

Told through the writings of a teenage girl, this story most definitely has its pros and cons. Cons: it is super clunky, as the story is written in letters from a girl who has no idea what grammar is. She also acts more like a young child than a teenager, and a lot of the characters do not act their age at all. It is also very hard to follow, as it switches from past to present in the middle of a sentence.
Pros: I kept wanting to know what happened to one of the characters that died before the events of the novel. That was mainly what kept me reading. It was also fairly fast paced. I liked how it started, and how it ended, but it definitely could have been much better. I liked it, but it wasn't amazing.