A review by devilll
An Unacceptable Offer by Mary Balogh

emotional funny hopeful lighthearted relaxing fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

I loved loved the romance in this though I wish was more time to develop it. The romance between the secondary characters came out of nowhere though, I was really surprised by that.

I loved all the characters in this, even Honor. She seemed more like a vain naive conniving little chit than the OW. I loved how the hero through gradual interaction with her just seemed so amused then fed up with her acts, lol.

Jane, sweet, sensible, Jane. I loved her and I loved how Michael fell for her too. It was beautiful.

Michael, the best most doting dad ever, I loved all his interactions with his daughters and the children’s interaction with Jane was so sweet and beautiful too.

I really wish this was a longer novel, I thoroughly enjoyed it.