A review by traditionson
Foundling by D.M. Cornish

3.0

Ok where to start with such an interesting premise, I was originally going to give this book 4 stars as the story was interesting and kept good pace. If not for the 120 pages of dictionary like reading at the back i would have finished it in 2 days. it would have been a wonderful story if the characters had become more fleshed out over the course of the 300 pages. It would have left me feeling more enthralled. Overall the book had a good story, too many unanswered questions and information that could probably be guessed at. If you use the end part throughout it breaks the immersion but does provide a greater insight to the world, if not the characters. I will still try the rest of the series but wont be reading the extra at the end anymore. Just too much like being back at school, repetitive and boring.