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Grown-Up Pose by Sonya Lalli
3.0

good writing and editing. Weirdly frustrating plot that took a swerve and then a 180 like the swerve never happened. Excruciating details in some scenes and then jumps in time in others that felt a little like whiplash.

A little like this story couldn't decide whether it wanted to be a romance or about grown-up women friendship or navigating life- kind of like the character herself I guess lol