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A review by pine_wulf
Someone You Can Build a Nest In by John Wiswell

3.5

I liked the plot quite a bit in this one. There is at least one surprise that I only began to suspect right before the reveal. The characters are pretty good too. I loved Shesheshen. The romance was just so-so for me. I think Shesheshen does too quick an about-face on 'I want Homily to be a nest' to 'Oh no, I can't do that to Homily' and I didn't really feel the chemistry. Plus I got sick of the 'Oh no, the things that attract me to her are actually her damage' that then really never even were dealt with. I also think the epilogue goes on too long.