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The Only Woman in the Room by Marie Benedict
2.0

Ugh… this story has so much potential, but I can’t stand the writing. The author will show you something, then immediately tell you verbatim what it meant in an attempt to make sure the reader “gets it.” Have more faith in readers, we are just as smart and knowledgeable as the characters in the story.