A review by pages_with_panda
A Touch of Darkness by Scarlett St. Clair

adventurous dark slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.0

✅ Finished Dec 20, ‘22 

Not sure how a book about gods ended up boring, but it was. The first half was slow and uneventful. I managed to finish it so I had to rate it 2 stars nonetheless. 

This had so many awful stereotypes about Persephone that reminded me of Lore Olympus. 

1. Persephone is a young, sheltered, naive, maiden with no powers. Oh, and a virgin (to the delight of Hades). 
2. Demeter is the over-bearing, abusive, controlling mother who stalks her daughter. 
3. Hades is the rich and elusive club owner who is misunderstood. He can do no wrong and is actually a nice guy and tries to help mortals. He also doesn’t want anyone to know. 

The story is told in a modern way, Persephone gets an internship at a newspaper office and decides to write about Hades, despite his wishes to the contrary and everyone’s warnings against it. She ends up losing a bet with him and ends up contracted with him for six months and must “make life” in the Underworld or else be stuck down there forever. 

She basically does whatever she wants this entire book and suffers no consequences whatsoever.
At the end she finally stands up to her mother and finds her power, thanks to Hades, and decides to live with him anyways. 

No real substance to the characters and the story was flimsy at best. 

Wouldn’t recommend as a retelling to the Hades+Persephone. 


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