A review by a_seductive_cactus
Vera and the Vegas V: Part One by Sarah Blue, Ashley Bennett

2.0

Holding off in a full review until I read part 2. The writing in part 1 is pretty rough- telling not showing to the extreme. Tons of inner monologue/thoughts of the characters to explain the plot rather than having it unfold. I heard part 2 is a big improvement in writing style so maybe there’s hope.
Definitely not in the same tier of storytelling as Lola and the Millionaires.