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A review by a_seductive_cactus
Vera and the Vegas V: Part One by Sarah Blue, Ashley Bennett
2.0
Holding off in a full review until I read part 2. The writing in part 1 is pretty rough- telling not showing to the extreme. Tons of inner monologue/thoughts of the characters to explain the plot rather than having it unfold. I heard part 2 is a big improvement in writing style so maybe there’s hope.
Definitely not in the same tier of storytelling as Lola and the Millionaires.
Definitely not in the same tier of storytelling as Lola and the Millionaires.