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A review by shaffe71
Cameron Battle and the Hidden Kingdoms by Jamar J. Perry
2.0
I think with a couple more rounds of revisions, this would have been a lot better. There's minimal character development, the plot moves so fast that nothing feels explained, and some of the writing felt unnatural. I did not know that this was planning to have a sequel, and I do not think I will pick it up.