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Defiance of the Fall by TheFirstDefier
3.5
adventurous funny medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

The author tries to appreciate eastern cultivation novels - but unfortunately gets it very, very wrong. Buddhism and Taoism are not interchangable terms. Some dev edits would’ve addressed this. Maybe. 

The diversity of the cast is awesome. The people are people. The author actually likes women (notable in a genre in which women are not liked).  The story does start to drag as you get further along. 

The series could really do with some line and copy edits. 

Also, it’s easy to see where The Primal Hunter ‘borrowed’ from (rather heavily too.)