abby0194 's review for:

Conversion by S.C. Stephens
2.0

This was so bizarre. There would be three very long pages just describing one room, but then skip over an entire scene that was played up like it would be important.
*2 pages describing a paint color or outfit
*1 page "I can't wait for dinner tonight" -Page Break- "Dinner was good and only slightly eventful"
*Eight more pages describing more paint colors and outfits

Do you see the ratio?? like I said, bizarre.