A review by nicolehitchcock
The Book of Asmodeus by Crede Axton

adventurous mysterious slow-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character
• Strong character development? No
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

The Books of Asmodeus presents an ambitious premise: an angel drawn to darkness who falls in love with the prince of demons. On paper, this should offer a compelling blend of forbidden romance and epic conflict. Unfortunately, this story left much to be desired. 

One of the book’s biggest challenges lies in its chaotic structure. The narrative jumps between perspectives and plot points too abruptly, making it difficult to follow the story’s trajectory or feel grounded in the world. The plot itself also falters. Scenes that should carry emotional weight often feel hollow and lack the necessary build-up to leave a lasting impact.

The characters suffer from a lack of development. The angel and the demon prince, the story’s emotional core, never fully come alive on the page. Their motivations are hinted at but rarely explored in depth, which leaves their relationship feeling rushed and fake.

For readers looking for character depth, clarity, and a strong narrative arc, this novel may prove more frustrating than rewarding.