cowboyromancebookclub 's review for:

Fall With Me by Brooke Montgomery

2.0

emotional sad slow-paced

Plot or Character Driven: Character

Strong character development: No

Loveable characters: No

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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DNF because Ellie was intolerable and unprofession. She pissed me off on an emotional level and I'm only leaving this review in case other people writing a similar book can learn something from why Ellie is such a bad main character. My best friend was killed by a drunk driver and the drunk driver was my classmates father. Did I ever take my anger out on my classmate? No. When I helped put his father in jail and keep him in jail, did the son ever take his anger out on me? No. Because we are both functional human beings who know that someone is not the actions of another and when you kill sometime, even unintentionally, and there is overwhelming evidence, multiple witnesses, and people speak to their bad character outside of the event, you acknowledge your bias and open up to the possibility that you only saw one side of them. And for Ellie to treat Landen and Landen alone as the sole reason her cousin's jail time was absurd. This was such a poorly written 'enemies' to lovers that I am in shock and couldn't finish this book. 
I'd give it one star but added a star for Landen being the mature one and not getting Noah to drop Ellie because she's such an awful person to him for no justifiable reason.