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A review by azieyosabor
Work It Out by Eva Siedler
emotional
funny
informative
inspiring
lighthearted
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
I had high hopes, I mean, that cover? Adorable! And the synopsis got me like, "This is gonna be good!" But, sigh, it kinda tripped after 20%, and now I'm here a bit disappointed. The potential was sky-high, but it's was a big mess with pacing issues.
The writing started smooth, making it a quick read, but after 30%, it went on a rollercoaster. Rushed pace, no clear rhythm – like the author was trying to cram all their ideas into those little 400 pages. Just needed better pacing or maybe a few more pages to breathe. Now, the dialogue – it started natural, but as the main characters got closer, it got cringe-worthy. I'm talking goosebumps of cringe, and not the good kind. Also, mixed POV’s? Usually my jam, but here, it felt like a mixtape gone wrong. Got a bit lost at times.
Plot Rundown: Jake Newman, a Hollywood hunk with secret health issues (POTS), and Rayah Summers, a hard-ass trainer on the brink of bankruptcy. Jake needs to shape up for a superhero role, and Rayah's resort is his last hope. But it's not just about the workouts; it's a balance beam nightmare with secrets threatening everyone's dreams.
Rayah: Admirable journey, really, but for some reason, I couldn't fully attach myself to her. Sweet, funny, and overcoming trauma – great qualities, but not super obsessed with her character.
Jake: Is very desperate and cheesy after 30%. I couldn't take him seriously, and my attachment level was even lower than with Rayah. His POTS was handled beautifully, though. The book shed light on a sensitive topic, and I learned a lot about POTS, so props for that.
Romance: Chemistry? Yes. Conversations? Good. Desperation? A bit too much. Liked their relationship but felt the third-act breakup was way too late (not that I even like third-act breakups in books), and the end was severely rushed.
Fitness Storyline: Loved it! Not your usual abusive diet culture, but a natural fitness journey. Gym family vibes and small-town charm – nailed it. The female trainer angle was refreshing. Great insight into fitness without being preachy – well done!
Overall, cute, sweet, spicy – a mixed bag. Not a perfect five, but hey, it's a cute read. Celebrity romance vibes on point. Characters and writing could use some polishing, but it's a nice addition to your reading list. Coming out on January 29, 2024 – mark your calendar if you're into playful, lighthearted romance with self-improvement vibes.
Note: I'm low-key hoping the author spills the tea on Vicky and Samuel. Almost loved them more than the main duo! Also, more Grace, please.
"Thank you NetGalley, Entangled Publishing, and the author for sending me a copy of this e-arc. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own."
The writing started smooth, making it a quick read, but after 30%, it went on a rollercoaster. Rushed pace, no clear rhythm – like the author was trying to cram all their ideas into those little 400 pages. Just needed better pacing or maybe a few more pages to breathe. Now, the dialogue – it started natural, but as the main characters got closer, it got cringe-worthy. I'm talking goosebumps of cringe, and not the good kind. Also, mixed POV’s? Usually my jam, but here, it felt like a mixtape gone wrong. Got a bit lost at times.
Plot Rundown: Jake Newman, a Hollywood hunk with secret health issues (POTS), and Rayah Summers, a hard-ass trainer on the brink of bankruptcy. Jake needs to shape up for a superhero role, and Rayah's resort is his last hope. But it's not just about the workouts; it's a balance beam nightmare with secrets threatening everyone's dreams.
Rayah: Admirable journey, really, but for some reason, I couldn't fully attach myself to her. Sweet, funny, and overcoming trauma – great qualities, but not super obsessed with her character.
Jake: Is very desperate and cheesy after 30%. I couldn't take him seriously, and my attachment level was even lower than with Rayah. His POTS was handled beautifully, though. The book shed light on a sensitive topic, and I learned a lot about POTS, so props for that.
Romance: Chemistry? Yes. Conversations? Good. Desperation? A bit too much. Liked their relationship but felt the third-act breakup was way too late (not that I even like third-act breakups in books), and the end was severely rushed.
Fitness Storyline: Loved it! Not your usual abusive diet culture, but a natural fitness journey. Gym family vibes and small-town charm – nailed it. The female trainer angle was refreshing. Great insight into fitness without being preachy – well done!
Overall, cute, sweet, spicy – a mixed bag. Not a perfect five, but hey, it's a cute read. Celebrity romance vibes on point. Characters and writing could use some polishing, but it's a nice addition to your reading list. Coming out on January 29, 2024 – mark your calendar if you're into playful, lighthearted romance with self-improvement vibes.
Note: I'm low-key hoping the author spills the tea on Vicky and Samuel. Almost loved them more than the main duo! Also, more Grace, please.
"Thank you NetGalley, Entangled Publishing, and the author for sending me a copy of this e-arc. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own."