A review by jraz76
Gallows Hill by Darcy Coates

dark tense medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Plot
• Strong character development? Yes
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

Coates relies too heavily on the same imagery and uses the same descriptive words repeatedly (running her tongue over lips, licking lips, raspy, gray, and loamy). I’m no author by any means, but it seems synonyms would help.