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A review by couldbestephen
Battle for Bergonia by
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I have nothing new to write that I haven’t previously said in my past reviews of Berg’s works. This third book is more of the same stuff we saw in The Magestics and Conquest of Fire; poor plotting, bad prose, flat characters, and typos galore. Berg’s ability to not improve his writing style over 6 years and 5 books is the only thing impressive here.
If you’ve bought this book from the author at a convention or fair, or are looking up reviews to see if it’s worth buying, save yourself. Don’t do it. This unedited fantasy “epic” isn’t even a fun bad read. It’s not worth the money the author put into publishing it.
Self published authors - please hire editors. Please have people read your work who can be critical of it. You don’t have to go to school and study English to be an author but for God’s sake, you’ve gotta work on your talent and let others help you.
If you’ve bought this book from the author at a convention or fair, or are looking up reviews to see if it’s worth buying, save yourself. Don’t do it. This unedited fantasy “epic” isn’t even a fun bad read. It’s not worth the money the author put into publishing it.
Self published authors - please hire editors. Please have people read your work who can be critical of it. You don’t have to go to school and study English to be an author but for God’s sake, you’ve gotta work on your talent and let others help you.