A review by ursulaslayleguin
Ebony Gate by Ken Bebelle, Julia Vee

Did not finish book.

Ugh. Everything about this book is too much. Too much detail about the magic system crammed in everywhere. Too much explanation all the fucking time. There is no room for the reader to imagine anything when the author is constantly explaining every meaningless detail. what’s that adage about show not tell? This author needs to hear that. Stop telling me about eberythinG!! And don’t get me started on the romance between Emiko and that dumb investor guy. I only made it a quarter of the way though because this book reads so amateurish. Go publish this on fanfic.net.