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A review by ladymair
The Blood Stones by Tori Tecken
Did not finish book. Stopped at 50%.
I tried. I really did but I had no drive to continue. I found the characters to be boring and if I’m honest I feel the author chose the wrong MC for this book. ||The traitors son and senna would have been far more interesting ||
Also I couldn’t see the point of this book? There was next to no plot and hardly any character development. Hardly anything had happened. And I get that Gehrin storyline you won’t get a lot but I would still expect to see more connection between the brothers instead of being told. And to go from one brother hating him to being fine the next minute is a bit jarring
But to have no threads of storylines woven throughout the book was a choice and one that isn’t for me. There was no hook to keep me going no questions and answers happening.
Why was the kings son killed ? What is Master L plan? Why was he taking the kids to what purpose? Having his POV i feel we should have been told the why of things.
We’re told a lot of the political manoeuvring and they feel very shallow and unbelievable. The author has obviously put a lot of thought into the worldbuilding but in some cases it doesn’t translate well to the page but I can see this being the strongest part of the story.
I found the writing to be a bit jarring. It would repeat itself and meander on long sentences when it’s not needed. Towards the end I skimmed a lot to try to get to the point of each scene and chapter and yet I couldn’t seem to find one.
Overall I find the story very shallow and it’s not for me.
Also I couldn’t see the point of this book? There was next to no plot and hardly any character development. Hardly anything had happened. And I get that Gehrin storyline you won’t get a lot but I would still expect to see more connection between the brothers instead of being told. And to go from one brother hating him to being fine the next minute is a bit jarring
But to have no threads of storylines woven throughout the book was a choice and one that isn’t for me. There was no hook to keep me going no questions and answers happening.
Why was the kings son killed ? What is Master L plan? Why was he taking the kids to what purpose? Having his POV i feel we should have been told the why of things.
We’re told a lot of the political manoeuvring and they feel very shallow and unbelievable. The author has obviously put a lot of thought into the worldbuilding but in some cases it doesn’t translate well to the page but I can see this being the strongest part of the story.
I found the writing to be a bit jarring. It would repeat itself and meander on long sentences when it’s not needed. Towards the end I skimmed a lot to try to get to the point of each scene and chapter and yet I couldn’t seem to find one.
Overall I find the story very shallow and it’s not for me.