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A review by merilizabeth
Oblivion by Jennifer L. Armentrout
4.0
Why do I keep doing this?
This part took me ages to read. I cant stop reading the same books from the other POV even when I know I will hate the repeat. I always somewhat do, but still haven't managed to stop myself. Since I got bored reading this through again I did find some massive loopholes here. For One they could use the Opal as a bracelet and when joining hands it would power up both of them. How smart would that be right? And the second One which i don't know if i pointed out before or not is the airborn onyx. Like previously it stayed on their clothes after going through the Doors and once they had tolerance built up it suddenly was not catching on to clothes or skin anymore? Like what the actual f? BY the logic here they did not have 15 minutes when passing through the Doors but 50 second window that tolerance Made possible. All that beside Beth went through the Doors and didn't feel the onyx, I know she had some tolerance also, but not even a wince? Alrighty... And One last thing wouldn't it be faster to get some special suits for radiation or skuba suits to go through all the sprays in much faster Time frame than building tolerance that might not work? Just saying...
Otherwise the language and fluency is good as always.
This part took me ages to read. I cant stop reading the same books from the other POV even when I know I will hate the repeat. I always somewhat do, but still haven't managed to stop myself. Since I got bored reading this through again I did find some massive loopholes here. For One they could use the Opal as a bracelet and when joining hands it would power up both of them. How smart would that be right? And the second One which i don't know if i pointed out before or not is the airborn onyx. Like previously it stayed on their clothes after going through the Doors and once they had tolerance built up it suddenly was not catching on to clothes or skin anymore? Like what the actual f? BY the logic here they did not have 15 minutes when passing through the Doors but 50 second window that tolerance Made possible. All that beside Beth went through the Doors and didn't feel the onyx, I know she had some tolerance also, but not even a wince? Alrighty... And One last thing wouldn't it be faster to get some special suits for radiation or skuba suits to go through all the sprays in much faster Time frame than building tolerance that might not work? Just saying...
Otherwise the language and fluency is good as always.